you gave her a sun,
when i left her a new moon.
you were her place to run,
when our end came too soon.
as much as i hate you,
i owe you my reason for living.
if her thoughts weren't so taboo,
she would be your's because i wouldnt have been forgiven.
sometimes i think she would have done better if she chose you,
you can give her so many things i never could.
but thats not what she choose to do,
and i WILL make thinks turn out for her greater good.
she is with me.
she'll be where i am.
i am her's for eternity.
we are forever the lion and the lamb.
Author notes
2. You can write a poem from a character’s point of view [[can be ANYONE]]. Please say in your author’s notes who you are writing from.
~*~*~*~*~*~*its kind of a letter that edward wrote to jacob (from the twilight saga)
TEAM SWITZERLAND!!!!...imagine732
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- Welcome all Twilighters, Fanpires, Twi-Hards and Twilightoholics by Missa.
425 points, ended August 1, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
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yes another fellow team switzerland!!!! i was starting to think i was the only one, lol. i love this, it definatly captures the greatfulness edward has for jacob. wonderful
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oh! and your team!!!
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hi..im sooo sorry i forgat about my username and my team..lol..it just slipped my mind..
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you need to add your username. but i love your poem. i could totally see edward saying that. especially:
"as much as i hate you,
i owe you my reason for living."
lol!
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