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Hurt Me

Hurt me,
Cut me,
make me scream,
take my life,
just make me bleed,
you stole my heart,
then stomped it and left it in the dirt,
you were the one who had stopped the hurt,
but now it's back and here to stay,
i never thought it would come..this day,
the day when you left me for another girl,
after you told me i was your world,
you said i was the one you wanted,
the one you needed,
so i gave you my heart,
my fears you defeated,
you got past the wall i put up to protect,
but in the end your love,
i just couldnt deflect,
so
hurt me,
cut me,
make me scream,
take my life,
just make me bleed...

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  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 23, 2008
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    amazing!! love it this is my favourite


  • xXundeadXx
    July 30, 2008
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    ...

    now u feel it... what u did to me.


    • SaviDropKick.Oi.
      July 30, 2008
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      Grady i ddnt do this to you..how did I? what did I do? whatever it was..im sorry...im sorry for being such a fuck up...


  • ScreamXOutXLoud
    July 29, 2008
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    I'm sorry. I will die ok?

    • SaviDropKick.Oi.
      July 29, 2008
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      no dont..i dont want that okay? i just want you..but you want her...im fine with that, i know she's better than me, at everything, just be happy..if your happy..so am i..

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