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Hell Fire and Damnation


Dante’s inferno is a journey of fear and darkness

If taken literally it can cause people to stress

It’s an epic poem concerning good and evil

The battling of wits between God and the Devil

All hope is abandoned as you enter the gates of Hell

It’s a long journey of Purgatory the nine circles tell

Dante’s journey through the realms of the dead

With Virgil by his side, is a tale of dread

As you descend through each circle you hear the tortured cries

For all who have sinned must be punished for their lies

The punishment is measured by the enormity of their sin

And as you travel through each circle the wrath of justice will begin

Hippocrites, thieves, traitors and worse

Those who on earth, showed no remorse

Divine justice they call it, No hope at what cost?

Poor victims of suffering, no forgiveness all lost

Tormented souls abandoned in purgatory

Within a fiery Hell, with Satan in all his glory

“An eye for an eye” “ a tooth for a tooth” the Holy book says

It also states forgiveness when we say our prayers

The wages of sin is death, so we have paid the price

Yes! Dante’s inferno is fictitious, and we must wait for Paradise.



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  • penman gold member
    July 15
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    Excellent

    Such a well expressed write. so very creative. Congratulations on the silver.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 20, 2008

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    Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • Mad Pastor Grovell
    August 4, 2008

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    The last line spoils what is otherwise an excellent warning of the HELLISH punishments awaiting SINNERS in DEEPEST HADES.


  • echo-ink
    July 31, 2008
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    Ye Speak Truth!!

    I loved this, and the truth it includes. Yessa!