A knight in shining armor?
Oh my, shall I swoon?
But you see, the problem is
that I want him far too soon.
Lifting all that metal,
getting those greaves loose,
is so much of a hassle,
my mood, I think I'll lose.
But, oh! About that elf,
he's easy to undress!
Just undo a few buckles,
and the bedroom floor's a mess!
Besides, all that muscle
that's not in his pecks
I'm sure I'll find elsewhere
once I've the 'balls' to inspect!
A contest entry
- Adult Ladies only by Riftkin.
780 points, ended August 8, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is excellent and deserves more than the HW it garnered. Highly original with a smooth rhythm and well rhymed. It's a gold in my book!
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LMAO!!!!
So THAT'S why you play WoW!!! hehehe...
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hehe
speaking striclty as a knight in shining armour, I do a good job of getting undressed a lot faster than you might think.
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Thank you for picking that which suits you.
and writing for my contest.
Riftkin
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bravo!
weirdly charming and amusing! -
bravo!
weirdly charming and amusing! -
bravo!
weirdly charming and amusing!
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Hahaha!
Well, I'm glad I prefer leather over steel.
Interesting to see what you'd think.
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You go girl ..I love how you worked this magic elf business. A messy floor and the inspection...Wow!
great writing...
novy
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Bravo! Creative and funny, this is just a wonderful take on the prompt! Well done and best of luck (although you shouldn't need it!)
Ken
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i liked this write it was very interesting and it made me chuckle. keep up the great work.
*~*bee*~*
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