Pride is a sin
cause one thinks
that one is better
than others
One can never be
better than
one's sisters
or brothers
We're equals
in Gods eye's
the creator
of us all
So to think that one
is better than
his children say's one
is better then him
Which is not possible
if you love God!
A contest entry
- Seven Deadly Sins (Rounds???) by Crazy9Piano8Freak.
450 points, ended August 6, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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powerful
I love this it speaks to all of us. We are all unique for a reason. We help each other out and we're equal. -
well, this is very good. and i can totally understand the last two stanzas because i am close to god... or i would like to think so. you did very well, so good job and good luck! thanks for entering!
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