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Ghost Within My Mind



I would have told you I love you
if we hadn’t been saying goodbye
With the end always a breath away
it never seemed real to me
like vapors disappearing before my eyes
and even though you’re gone today
there’s a ghost lurking within my mind

I wanted you to know me
to make sense of a heart gone wrong
I wanted you to need me like I needed you
and to wash away the sins of thought and deed
You were too perfect to grasp
and too wonderful to touch
but now that you’re gone
all I have are memories fading
and a ghost walking withing my mind

It’s only now that you haunt me
on quiet, lonely nights
when the wind carries your name into my ears
leaving me adrift in a sea of regret and remorse
I can’t face who I am
much less what I’ve become
Just a wounded soul living in an broken heart
walking these empty halls
hoping to catch a glimpse
of the ghost stalking within my mind

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this, like a haunting melody in the night. Gorgeous write. All the best in the contest


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 29, 2008

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    this is amazzing honey,
    i really enjoyed reading this, its very romantic and its so original in its style and genre, its sad yet not pitiful, all my love,
    best of luck in the contest,
    kitty xxx