Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle,
The cow jumped over the moon.
The little dog laughed to see such fun
And the dish ran away with the spoon!
But as the cow landed, tragedy came
The fiddle choked the cat
The the spoon broke the dish
The poor little dog screamed
At the horror its seen
The cow landed bad, broke its neck
And it rolled into the spoon
The spoon smashed the dish
The dish shredded the fiddle
The fiddle slit the cats throat
And twitched towards the dog
collapsing on it sufforcating it.
Hey diddle diddle, The cat and the fiddle
Lie on the floor broken
The cow won't jump no more
The little dogs dead, after the fun
And the dish died with the spoon
Author notes
Hey diddle diddle.
Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle,
The cow jumped over the moon.
The little dog laughed to see such fun
And the dish ran away with the spoon!
Not very good at all compared to some of my poems, but having sever writers, block. I know it doesn't flow in the middle at all, i hope you like anyway
Dancing Rabbits Make Great Stews (i agree)
A contest entry
- Wicked Nursery Rhymes - What Really Happened? by Wilted Rose Bush.
500 points, ended August 11, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What you think?
Comments
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A very well written poem. I like how you started with the original poem and then twisted it to become scarier, freakish and the real story of what the parents wouldn't want their kids to hear.
However, it may have been nice for the rhyming to continue throughout the poem.
Well done and good luck -
rofl haha this is so funny, haha dosent show me in a very good ligh that i laugh at this, i agree that it dosent flow on the middle but i love the story haha made me giggle
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lol this i must say made me laugh, (i must be an evil person) make a highlight of my evening
i like reading evil rhymes, a very good write
and best of luck in the contest x -
ooh, morbid twist of a childs nursury rhyme...I love it!
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nicely done
very good job good luck in the contest, Boog
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Lol. Nicely done. I liked it. The last verse was great.
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HAHAHA!! I love what happened in this wacky poem. You must have had fun writing it.
Madness prevails! 
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Roitflmao
This is great I hope that you do well in the contest with it best wishes and much love always I send
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what is with you and killing poor inncoent things!!!!! It's another tedfdy bear moemnt!!!!!
lol
despite this i thought it was very funny and well written.
good luck in the contest bro
xxx
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