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Subhuman nature

It's always so easy to hate,
what else is the absence of love ?
But is it really gone ?
Are my mind playing tricks on me again?
That self defence instinct acting up again
Why can't I just throw caution in the wind and trust
and wait patiently? Why do I need to be so insecure,
about you, about me? why can't I just let this be ?
let it grow into whatever it may become.
Why do i need to suffer from subhuman nature,
when I know I'm better than this ?

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 29, 2008
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    Nice Questions

    I like how you start the piece with a simple but powerful statement. Then proceed to run the gamut with question after question to end it with I know I'm better than this. Great. I loved it! It flowed easily through my mind as I read. Great job. ~mandie~