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Not here

Shes not here.
Not really here.

Shes in her world.
The one she made.

One better then
the one shes in.

Where everything is better.
In a world where
no one dies. And no one cries.

Shes not here.
Not really here.

Please Please tell me what you think. I really want feedback on this one.

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  • Wall Door Salad
    September 4, 2008
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    this describes how i feel alot.


  • Emerald-Spirit
    September 2, 2008
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    Short and sad. I can really relate to the feelins in this poem. Great write. Xds-gX


  • Nostalgic Moon
    August 1, 2008

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    I like it! this is exactly how I feel. I'm always taking myself away from the pain of reality. Great job!