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Falling

Falling into the darkness.
Deeper into the darkness.

Theres no light here.


Nothing shines in this place.
Nothing bright in this place.

Just darkness.
Broken hearts.
And nothing at....


ALL!

Please Please tell me what you think. I really want feedback on this one.

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  • Tiffany Turner
    August 1, 2008

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    Goob Job

    wow...this is really sad...while i was readin this it made me sad and lonely...i dont know if that is what you where going for...this is really good job keep up the good work...

    ~:~Tiffany~:~