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Her Beauty


To curves of pleasure;
beneath her nape,
are promises__
and to a sea of plenty,
by way of the wind
she takes me to,
my beautiful
…death



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My Inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2415/549.jpg?1217325388

"The Wind and The Sea" by ChrissieCool

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 29, 2008
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    another sweet but sad poet, thank you for sharing
    Linda


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 29, 2008

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    very romantic words my friend,

    always so beautiful.

    just lovely

    God bless...


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    July 29, 2008

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    Your words did a wonderful job embracing this picture. Always extraordinary writing..
    Soulful Woman

  • Rowan gold member
    July 29, 2008

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    Small deaths are good things, sometimes.

    Very nicely done.