no pawprints
on the kitchen floor -
this rainy day
A contest entry
- 'ku 'ku cachoo --enter your haiku here :) by sailor ptolema.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 78 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh right, I forgot the clappies that look like they're flagging down a jet


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I like this - noticing what's missing and remembering your absent pet.
Congratulations on the bronze.
marlene

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awwww, this is SO sad
. It makes me think of my cat who just died
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I love this.
thanks for entering and g'luck.
-sailor ptolema
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Hey - thanks for the bronze s-p

Yes my cat also just died - an inspiration for a lot of my 'ku,
I'm going to miss him.
what is it
about birdsong?
black cat
*published - Clouds Peak Oct 2006*
Alan D Taylor -
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de nada
. I felt this one, as I've lost 2 cats recently...
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Makes me invision a lost or missing pet...I don't know why but it does...beautiful imagery here. Great piece.
~mandie~
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Thanks mandie - you are perceptive. First rain since my cat died
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