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forest walk

grey bark curls with glee
crooked branches cling to leaves
natural forest scenes

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Haiku
a weeping birch

A contest entry

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  • Age of Rain
    August 15, 2008
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    This was very pretty.


  • penman gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    Wonderful

    What a truly creative use of form with wonderful descriptions. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lonely Christina
    July 30, 2008

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    i usually dont like/ read haukis but this is great lol i tried my hand at writng one once but it sucked! haha good luck in the contest
    xoxo- christina


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Like the image of a stroll through the forest...it is a beautiufl thing. I enjoyed each line. Great piece. ~mandie~