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Darkness Falls

 

 

 

Wretched spawn of satan,

born in the darkest hour

beneath the finest luminary

in the highest torture tower...

 

These were the circumstances

leading to the world's demise.

The very reason we fear the darkness;

and how evil did arise.

 

Preponderate to sin

he reigned inferno on the damned

to rejoice in the new birth;

his the son of repremand...

 

Consequences for the wicked,

nothing predominate to suggest

that they ransacked the sacrosanct

dominated by satan's request.

 

But here there is no room

for repsrisals, nor denial.

Send their hate int flaming crevasse,

and minimise their soul's survival...

 

 

Author notes

Word bank:

luminary: a celestial body, as the sun or moon.
forlorn: desolate or dreary; unhappy or miserable, as in feeling, condition, or appearance.
wretched: very unfortunate in condition or circumstances; miserable; pitiable.
sacrosanct: extremely sacred or inviolable: a sacrosanct chamber in the temple.
inferno
crevasse
dominate
preponderate: to be superior in power, force, influence, number, amount, etc.; predominate: Evidence for the accused preponderated at the trial.


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Comments


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    September 1, 2008

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    This is lovely liz, You disguised the word bank very very well. You did amazing with the prompt i loved the poem hun
    all my love
    kitty xxx


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 29, 2008
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    hows this for your fantasy image:
    http://tomasvalo.deviantart.com/art/fantasy-24437662
    For your happy image:
    http://hannahhavoc.deviantart.com/art/happy-76509280
    Word bank:

    luminary: a celestial body, as the sun or moon.
    forlorn: desolate or dreary; unhappy or miserable, as in feeling, condition, or appearance.
    wretched: very unfortunate in condition or circumstances; miserable; pitiable.
    sacrosanct: extremely sacred or inviolable: a sacrosanct chamber in the temple.
    inferno
    crevasse
    dominate
    preponderate: to be superior in power, force, influence, number, amount, etc.; predominate: Evidence for the accused preponderated at the trial.

    hope thats ok