[ Far off bell ]

Far off bell
ringing closer
alarm clock awake

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Haiku's Here! by Age of Rain. 750 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
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Age of Rain
August 15, 2008
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I liked the distance to nearness this piece brought. Well done.
- crimsondew
  August 15, 2008
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  Thank you!
IrishGypsyRose
July 30, 2008

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Damn Clock
I hate my alarm, lol! This is done with good imagery and I enjoyed the piece. Maybe add a bit more color? just a suggestion, I'm sure mine need work as well, or so I've been told by numerous people. lol. Great job. ~mandie~
- crimsondew
  July 31, 2008
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  Hmm..will think abt it, alarm clock sounds all mechanical
  
  Thank you for your advice!
OnceUponAMind
July 29, 2008

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Nice Haiku! I still have yet to learn these

All my best Auntie
- crimsondew
  July 29, 2008
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  Thanks a lot dear
Soulful Woman
July 29, 2008
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Nice.. Still working on my Haikus..
Good luck in contest..
Soulful Woman
- crimsondew
  July 29, 2008
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  Thanks and all the best to you too