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~Virginal Unveiling~

Passions silk grazes ivory skin,
temptations erotically stimulating,
unbridled desires.

Fingertips carefully trace trails
of moistened splendor;
eyes drinking in breathtaking poetry,
words dripping off lips of ecstasy.

A dainty flower preparing herself
for her first unveiling;
as his gentle moist lips entice her modesty,
enveloping her warmth with his ravenous touch.

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  • Nevel
    July 31, 2008
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    this is definitely one HOT poem.. wow, this is excellent I absolutely love it. very hot, sensual and very stimulating. excellent job with the prompt.

    good luck

    kat


  • creationsfromheart
    July 30, 2008
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    This is a good write sam good luck in the contest


  • Gypsie Ink
    July 30, 2008

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    Hot!

    I really don't need to reading this stuff at work! Sensual and stimulating! Awesome write. Sealbh math dhuibh!