Tired eyes need tight leather
to tantalise and stir
fantasies to life.
Contours defined and sending messages
to desiring loins
…Is all I beg
from
skin clad leather
playing
young and eager to please…
Author notes
Ladies I wish to see, do you want
a Knight to save you .. or do you
want a Hot Elf in tight leather?
Now, yes that statement is your prompt
with a twist...
You get 10 lines
and only 10 lines
to let me know
what was going through
you mind when you saw that.
Picture is from photobucket.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Adult Ladies only by Riftkin.
780 points, ended August 8, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice Poem!
Really Cool Write!
Congrats on your win!
Regards,
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Hehe LOVED this one sis.
Really kicked my morning off to a good start haha.
Liked
"Tired eyes need tight leather
to tantalise and stir
fantasies to life."
--great images, I would never have been
able to come up with something for this piece.
Wonderful job!!
& Congrats on the bronze
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hehehe
i forgot about this one, it was fun to write hehehe
Ta SiS
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Thank you for picking that which suits you.
and writing for my contest.
Riftkin
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Very well done, as usual, Cindy. For me there was a neat contrast in it by starting off with "tired eyes" and then working into sensuality, which leaves little room for fatigue. After being away on vacation for a while it is nice to jump back in with one of your savory poems. I send you a message, but now from these comments it appears that the stork came to visit Australia while I was away?? Congrats to both of you!
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*rolls eyes at the contests you enter*
LMAO...
"skin clad" could do with a hyphen, though it's not mandatory.
The rest is the erotica I refuse to write for Jacks...LMAO
Good luck
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haha...watch out one day soon, my hormones will be raging and i might snap at ya for a comment like that lol...but then i would feel like an idiot..cause i know you mean it in the best respect lol
i entered cause its a very good friend of mine, and cause well lately i dont write enough erotica at all, considering it has always been one of my fav genres and one that comes so naturally
well i could understand you not wanting to write it etc...your young...none of that stuff came out of me till i had experienced life more..and well sex lol...truthfully, i dont think one can write about it all unless they have experienced it , otherwise its not truly coming from your heart..if that makes sense lol
hmm yes i agree skin clad could have a hypen but see it working just as well without etc, but thanx darl
you know i appreciate that you point these things out...when are you going to start getting more people to comment like you
nothing beats being detailed if you have too..but most important giving the person the respect of your honesty
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I've written more than 10 homicidal poems =D
which you know, somebody my age shouldn't do. Heh.
Anyways yeah, I hate people & their damn vague comments! RAWR
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Now thats a nice pair of leathers....sending out that war call of pleasure....excellent write...
novy
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Tsk tsk... and you in a delicate condition
Wonderfully honest and to the point! Well done, Cin...
Ken
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hehehe im pregnant..not dead hehehehehehe
joking.
this was fun to write, a lot of fun heheh, makes me feel i should be doing more lol
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"Tired eyes need tight leather
to tantalise and stir
fantasies to life." - Great opener!!
I wish you all the best in the contest dear
Always, Amber
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hehehe i thought so too, thanks Amber..sorry i havent been so active on the site..but i plan on a catch up soon, so expect comments heheh
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haha this is such an elegant and expressionated piece and I love the words that fit the picture. hehe gotta love a fun guy
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ohh yes gotta love a ufn guy
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Very elegant in expression leaving ones imagination alive with passionate possibilities
Kinky too
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ohhh ignore the long reply that i have delted form this page anyway...it was for someone else. i posted it and it put it up under your name!!!
so sorry darl
but thanks it was fun to be kinky heheheh
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ohhhh Black leather!!! gotta love a man that can WEAR black leather. Loved the words you have penned to go with the picture. Good Luck hun. Love Juls
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OMG!!! lol You do twist the mind into strange visions with this one lol...I go to bed now with the thought of leather clad munchkins lol
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hehehe well only for the contest
but leather , tight leather...who could say no to that view hehehe
Thanx cuz
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I love your poem honey but that picture *fans furiously* you know what I'm like with men in leather...hmmmmmmmmm
Back to the poem...I really like the way you didn't beat about the bush and stated what you want...NOW!!!!
Best of luck in the contest honey
Love always
Mum 
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well why not hey
it's a sexy look indeed
yep i thought just say it!! lol
Thanx Mum
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