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Descent

Midnight walks on misty nights
The devils voice Is good to hear,
desecrating me under the moonlight
Hiding In shadows, as I weep amongst those
who have fallen
Entombed,  like a ragdoll lying motionless
The demons come, hell not far behind
The beast finishes with a snarl
A gentle soul, beaten by Insanity.

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Dark Option, with the quote..
The Devils voice Is sweet to hear
Stephen King

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  • plainoljoe
    August 1, 2008
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    but it is the "Insanity" that will consume 'the beast'

    Joe


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      August 2, 2008
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      Hiya Joe, Thankyou for your visit, as always a pleasure, I hope you are well my friend


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 29, 2008

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    Nice job. Exquisitely dark. I imagined this poem unfolding under the moonlight in an old cemetary with weather beaten stones.

    Great job.