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A Cross Patch?



I had this plaster
on my crutch.
It didn't hurt me
very much.
Spoiled my looks,
can you call them such?
Boys always asked me,
"Please go "Dutch."




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  • carole21
    August 9, 2008
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    funny write for the prompt . . liked the title . . also "Please go 'Dutch'" . .


  • Grey Mouser
    July 30, 2008

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    Very smart and humorous. Good rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • arafura
    July 29, 2008
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    Hahaha! Another little gem mate!