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A lovers poem

Music sounds better,
The words filling me with hope.
The world is so much sweeter
Now you've offered me your rope.
The sun is shining bright
The world coated in gold.
I know everything is alright
When i have you to hold
Sumer is brighter this year,
the sky is clear and blue,
And this time my dear
Its all because of you...
I Love you!

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  • Simply-Me
    July 29, 2008

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    Well Written

    Short and sweet...I really like it!

    However the line where it says "Now you've offered me your rope" makes the rhyme seem forced and awkard.