How dare you,
You left me behind, true,
Only because in truth I'm chubby,
I would have been a really great hubby.
I wish this day that I'd never seen your face,
Never chatted with you on little Myspace,
Because you only brought heartbreak,
To my meager little space.
You were hot, true to me,
How I wanted to get to know thee,
But instead by you I get blown off,
And now you sit with your friends and scoff.
So what, I'm condemned to stalking you,
If only you would have been true,
Then you wouldn't be shallow,
And I wouldn't feel hollow.
Goodbye Tanner, said and done,
I'm over you, you're not the one.
Author notes
I call this form wave poetry, if you follow the lines, they form waves stanza after stanza.
A contest entry
- Write about an X its closure time by Shydreamer3.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yea i managed to follow the ligns and i loved it. great write. i think we have all in a weird way been here. feeling like we need to reach out to the one we care about and then feeling like a stalker when they dont return calls. i havent personally been here, but im not gonna lie and say i didnt feel like driving by an x's house just to see if he was home. Thank u for entering.
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The sad thing was...after he brushed me off, I did become a stalker...somewhat...I just liked looking at him...but I gave up at some point...when I realized it wasn't going anywhere...and I matured.
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