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Him

The lights all off, the world at rest

I know all the words, I could pass any test

Instead I lie here, lost and alone

Waiting on nothing, not even the phone

Unable to sleep, with him on my mind

I just want the love we've left behind

The feel of his breath upon my skin

Understanding why they call it a sin

His arms around me, his lips against mine

As it all ends I know I will be fine

It was a false reality

I can finally see

His love was lie

To help him get inside

My head, my heart, and I fell for it all

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  • imagine732
    August 7, 2008

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    ooo..this is soo sad!.....i cant really relat with you there..but i do know, that he sounds like a complete jerk.....this is a really great poem...VERY nice write..
    keep writing
    keep smiling
    keep the peace!


  • neon nightmares
    July 31, 2008

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    I know what you mean. Iv'e had something very simmilar.
    Seems like the best thing in the world untill it's not there anymore.
    nice write, flows well.
    neon =D