maybe you wonder why i even bother
you and i both know you'll just mock
i used to care but thats behind me
i cant believe i wasted that star on you
now the birthday candles are lined up
fourteen to be exact; just how you like it
and you blew out the candles tonight
you'll pay for that
but of course i dont care anymore
more laughs and mocking follows this suggestion
a tear or two may be shed tonight
but not for you
maybe your dislike has grown to hate
as mine had that one day back in april
but no matter, i understand your anger
its the same as mine only a few pages ahead
chucked off the buddy list
how does it feel to be theoretically ex-friended?
if thats even word, you might reply
oh shut the heck up
goodbye. goodnight. happy birthday
to me.
Author notes
sorry that you have to read this. i know its horrible but it was on the spot and i didnt have time to post it before midnight.
A contest entry
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A very good write based on what happens when two friends have a falling out. Your hatred seems to be well defined and while it doesn't quite seem to be 'HATE' its still extremally spitful and full of wrath
Good luck with the contest -
great job
I actually feel like this right now, Saturday is my 18th bday and its gonna be hell but thats okay, its like the saying "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" lol i should be pretty damn strong than. This is a wonderful write and dont worry this isnt horrible, i like that i can relate and its still a good write, keep up the great work. Anyway thanks for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck. -
OH MY FLIPPEN GOSH!!!
I don't care if it is just me but I love love love this poem!! IT is sooosooosoo good!
i cant believe i wasted that star on you
Love it! soo true. for you! Wow kali.
When I was reading this my mouth dropped literly(SP)! I was like wow! I am speaklesss!
Remember is he or any other boy makes you cry tell me I will knock a few teeth out. I don't care how pretty his teeth look all straight! -
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youre silly. this poem is stupid.
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I agreee with erin! Hes a silly boy that was just a crack in your road to heaven but now he is gone. no need to worry!
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ahh clare. youre wasting beautiful words on a matter that DOESNT matter.
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It did leave me speechless! no I love it.it is my favorite!
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it left her speakless HAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHA. oh clare.
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not horrible. its kindof like kali sentimentalish like. this kid is lame for getting so many good poems wasted on him I HATE THAT HE DID THIS TO YOU. but child this is good. i love it. gooodd emotions
listen to
give it up
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okay so i randomly reread this poem.
and the comments.
and i listened to the song.
and it made me puke,
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just a random first commentttt
i love your new photo.
uuuuuuuuuuummm........
okay waittt.
the song madeee you puke or my poemmm? -
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the song the song.
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lol. no i hate this poem...except the ending. i like that. but this poem is stupid so dont tell me otherweise.
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no kali i lovee this poem. in a way i can't really explain in text lol. did you listen to the song??? do you like itt?
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ha no i didnt listen to it. im will right now.
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