I am the twinkle in your eye.
I am your shoulder on which you
can cry.
I am the passion that burns
in your soul.
I am your stability when you
lose all control.
I am the one who wants to
help you through your trials.
To be your strength in those
"forever" miles.
I am your comfort in
the midst of life's storm.
I will alway be there to
keep you safe and warm.
I am not a Godess and
I am by far imperfect,
but what I have to offer
is a lifetime of friendship.
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Thank you very much for entering my contest and the best of luck to you. I have read quite a few love poems and many that share this same feeling/emotion. I appreciate it
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This was beautiful - I did feel a brief moment of disappointment that the last verse didn't rhyme as strongly as the others...
but you took a rather cliche topic and put some lovely new images to it, like the forever miles, and being the stability [rather than the shoulders etc]
Nicely done - and thanks for entering!
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my sister
Though we have no blood ties
Our hearts together are bound
Lost to everyone outside
Our words within our hearts are found
No one else will kill you over something big
Or cry harder over something sad
Or laugh longer at your goofyness
Or have the memories we had
We will make more, I know
Our hearts the way will show
So dry those tears, my friend
Take this road with me, without end
For even when death or Rapture sing
Within our hearts we will forever be
When one's soul takes her flight
The other's will watch through that night
For the day when they will reunite
In each other's arms be again
With Jesus, the angels, & God our Light,
I will forever & for always be with my best friend.
~Chelle -
This is a wonderful poem with great rhyme and very specific flow. I think i might have read this before but i don't know if i commented on it. Anyway. I loved every single word. You couldn't get a stronger friendship than that. It was so lovely to read, i just had to read it a couple of times more. Who am i? A very fitting title that slips neatly into the poem and delivers the answer in the words below. I think you handle this one very well indeed. Too much! Just great!
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this is very well written and so very sweet, i loved it a lot.
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who needs the sight to prove how good you look, buy this I see perfection and an amourous pose of something unique. Lovely view, I must say
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Take a bow! This was simply delightful. The rhythm and flow of this piece was exceptional and the words very very beautiful. There is nothing here in my view that needs changing nor correcting. Such wonderful sentiments are a pleasure to behold. You really have a big heart. God bless you!
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Nicely written Annie.
I really liked this. Perfection is not real...It's merely an illusion.
The sentiment and feeling in this is wonderful.
Well written Sis
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