My life is like a void,
an empty space,
where I lose myself every chance I get.
You can't reach me here,
I am faiding away,
but I leave an after image.
One minuet you love me,
the next you throw me away,
like a crumpled peice of paper.
Useless now that it's destroyed,
but someone else finds me,
and uses me again.
Now I am crumpled and ripped,
almost completely empty.
There is this hole where my soul
used to be,
now there's not even a shred of light,
where emotions have touched me.
I am a zombie,
alive on the outside but dead,
to those who really love me.
No voices can be heard,
no feelings can be touched,
no emotions can reach,
and no one can see.
I am just a hollow,
inside and out,
dead,
and forgotten.
You can flame me if you want.
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"I am just a hollow... inside and out... dead... and forgotten."
Great write! =] "No voices can be heard,
no feelings can be touched,
no emotions can reach,
and no one can see."
seriously!! you're wicked talented, meh friend X]
Keep it up, ne? =]
-Rayne
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thank you and ignore the other girl. i live with her and i didn't know that she had logged out on me and put hers on. so i replied on hers instead of my own.
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wow. . . that is intense man. are you alright.
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yeah i am. but you should have told me that i was on yours when i answered the other girl. now she probably thinks that i am skitzo or something.
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