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Compassion

You think it is easy having a singular purpose???
I ask you, could you live like a mushroom 24hrs a day?

I spend all day every day, like the man
outside a burning building waiting for the baby to catch!!
I am eager, I am willing, and more than up to the task at hand.
Yet I am castigated, smothered, and beaten for it!!!

Oh, but for the same endeavor, the womb "That, soft, warm
and nuturing interloper!" Is held up in eternal esteem!!

I too hold the vast miracle of creation in my loins!
I too suffer great pains and a long journey
to bring life to this world.
Yet, I plow on with a stiff upper lip!!!

I may never be pretty, but I do my job with zeal!
I am who I am, if you don't like it, piss on ya!!!

Copyright 2008 Holly Dawn Hewlett

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  • briareus gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Nurturing upholding protecting, big labors of love of the great-hearted. Eloquent apologia.


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    Wow! Good venting! I am honoured to read your words, and salute you for them.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    Cute

    Good entry, umm can I use that word here. LOL


  • Dalaney gold member
    August 4, 2008
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  • Acdc327
    July 30, 2008
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    this is a great poem, it has a great flow. im looking foward to read the rest of your works

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