Aching arms reaching
to crystal skies of blue.
Wishing he was cradling
the soft skin that is you.
Yearning lips speaking
of loves many treasures.
Weeping vesper seeking
to release her pleasures.
Music plays melodic strings
from fairies harp she sings,
rising from mushroom rings,
fluttering of butterfly wings.
Catching dreams breaking
apart in wayward seclusion.
Drifting heartache beating
awakens inward intrusion.
Touching eyes reveling
sensual feel of innocence.
Kissing lovers moaning
into nights golden essence. .
Music plays melodic strings
from fairies harp she sings,
rising from mushroom rings,
fluttering of butterfly wings.
Walking ghosts finding
teardrops flowing undertow.
Swirling desire escaping
breath of the goddess glow.
Crying gasps fulfilling
a need of gifted royalty.
Heaving sighs are enticing
spirits visions of reality.
Music plays melodic strings
from fairies harp she sings,
rising from mushroom rings,
fluttering of butterfly wings.
Author notes
abab acac dddd aeae afaf dddd agag ahah dddd rhyme scheme. Just doing some thing different. The picture is one that I took at the Butterfly Conservatory on Mackinac Island, Michigan.
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Just come up with a tune
And find a vocalist
Somebody like Pat Boone
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Good job Charley...Bob 42
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Thank you Bob for reading and commenting.
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I am madly inlove with this poem Charley. You paited such a beautiful picture in my mind.
Love Guin
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Thank you Guin for reading and commenting. I appreciate it greatly.
Love Ck
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Beautiful
Hi charley, hope you are fine and happy.Have just read your poem and fell deeply in love with it.Your words so soft just floated by my eyes.
I love your new rhyme scheme always good to try something different.Your poem is filled with love and many beautiful visions.you have painted many in the mind of the reader.You are always a pleasure to read my friend, you never disapoint.Take care and much love to you.
~Angel~
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Thanks Angel for reading and commenting, I miss talking to you. I just got back from Michigan, I've been gone the last 8 days and have a lot of catching up to do.
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holy hell this was the most beautiful love poem I've ever read so filled with pasion loved the change up in rhyming scheme made it very interesting tho the words themselves touched me deeply. I am in love too so can relate to this loved the stanza with from faries harp she sings that was so whimsical and deep. you have such an amazing talent hopefully I too can progress to your level wow just friggin wow!!!! my poetry is about darker stuff, but I try at the love aspect still working on it as it is new to me...thanks for your comment on my work and I'll be reading more of yours hopefully I will gain some inspiration.
p.s love how the title resembles my name lol
xox
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Hi Tasha, thanks for reading and commenting on this write, sorry I haven't gotten back to you right away. I was on vacation in Michigan the last 8 days. I especially loved Macikinac Island what a beautiful place that is. They have a butterfly conservatory there and WoW, I had never seen so many wonderful butterflies of such beautiful colors. Anyway thanks for the read.
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Beautiful write, Charley. I like what you did with the rhyme. I think it's cool when people experiment with different kinds of rhyming. Also, liked the concept of butterfly wings. Seemed metaphorical in a way, like the beating that can be felt in people's hearts when their loved one is near. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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Thanks Haley for reading and commenting, and for catching the metaphorical phrases within the write, as they were meant to be so. *smile* Also thanks for being a loyal reader and commenter which is much more then I can say for many people on this site. In a couple of days I will be gone for a week, so if I don't catch one of your writes while I'm gone, I will when I return.
Lots of love, be good!!!!
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You're welcome, Charley. Yeah, I tend to be a loyal commenter. You should see how I am on youtube. I tend to comment a lot there, too.
On some channels that have like thousands of subscribers and a couple hundred videos, somehow my comments show up the most on some channels. Sometimes I feel like I talk too much.
Hope you have a good week while you're gone. I can't promise any new writes will be up when you get back, but I never know if I will find inspiration.
Take care.
Haley Mary
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