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The Way I Feel

Everyone writes poems about love
But now in love myself, I can't seem to write
It's like I can't describe the way I feel

Can you imagine...

Flying higher than the birds
Soaring above the clouds
You brush your hand against it as you pass

Well that's how I feel when I see him

Have you ever...

Run out into the rain
Fully clothed but without a care
And just gotten soaked?
The laughter, the fun...

Every second is like that
With him

My stomach goes into zero gravity
And the smile on my face gets wider
Just at the very thought of him

I have tried to explain
Just imagine...

That's how I feel
As best as words can describe
That's the way I feel

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I wrote this one about my new bf. I couldn't describe the way I feel about him. Its just...

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  • November-Dani
    August 10, 2008

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    Oh my god! This is incredible! What a fanstastic way to express your love for him. I am lucky enough to feel like this also, as you know. This poem just made me smile.
    Lots o love.
    Dani


  • GoodKnightPoet
    July 31, 2008
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    I am very happy for you.


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    July 29, 2008
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    Awww. How sweet! New love is always exciting and kinda scary at first but every moment with that person is like Heaven, or close to it. Iremember feeling that way, the way you're feeling now, only twice. I hope your relationship lasts for many years to come if he is the one God wants for you to have. Luv ya sis!

    ~Ru