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Too Good To Be True

I have been so close
To crying
But I can't
Why should I cry
When I say I don't care
Maybe it's not what I think
Maybe it's something else
That's hurting me
I blink back tears
But they aren't there
As I lie here
On the cold hard floor
I look around me
Everything looks too good
To be true
If I think, it's too good
Then maybe it is.

Author notes

Another oldie, but not so old. This one is from this year. Quite recent actually, that was during a relapse of my sad times. But I'm over it now.

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  • November-Dani
    August 10, 2008

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    This is so sad. Makes you think. Dontchya hate those relapses? This poem paints a great image.
    Love love love
    Dani.