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TobiDei Yaoi Poem

I drum my fingers nervously
Hand pressed flat against my thigh,
I can feel your eyes watching me
And I wonder when I'll come down from this high.

Thoughts flit through my mind
Things that would normally catch my attention,
I don't bother to think at all
While you have me in silent suspension.

I'm losing myself quickly
As you pull the mask away
For a moment I think about running,
But my body is telling me to stay.

To my horror
I'm caught in the rapture of your eyes
They haunt me, they lure me,
Blood-red like the crimson of the skies.

No; please explain.
Why do you have that curse?
You should have kept that stupid mask on,
The situation has gone from bad to worse!

Oh no.
You're coming far too close
I can feel your breath on my lips
Your scent is making me overdose.

Oh Jashin, Tobi!
Don't touch me there!
Stop caressing my chest,
Stop nuzzling my hair.

But please, don't stop,
I'd die if you do
I want to remain like this forever
In a world where all I can see is you.

I don't want to admit,
I want to say hate
But the way you're kissing me
Is putting my mind in a confused state.

I've wanted to tell you
For such a long time
I want to love you
I want you to be mine.

Author notes

This poem goes with the fanfiction I've started, and will most likely be turned into story format for one of the chapters.

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  • DennisP1
    August 2, 2008

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    Hmm, a poem written from the muse of a story.. You should perhaps find a way to incorporate it as is, or slightly modified if need be, and then enter it into the story..

    i have written folk songs into stories as well as poetic proposals.. So it can be done.. Perhaps as we write together you will see how easy it is to do.

    I enjoyed the soft romance of your poem as it slid to slightly erotic.. Good work.

    Den


  • Sir Squigglim
    July 30, 2008
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    scandalous!!

    naughty naughty naughty... really now, what more can I say?