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A Very Sad State of Affairs

When one waits for something,
it never seems to come.
But as you walk away in sadness,
it bowls you over like a meteor.
In the end, you find
you're still disappointed.
A very sad state of affairs...

In time, you'll see that all is a fair,
with clowns to be laughed at
And no one who cares.
We are the clowns, you see;
and life is the cruelty.
It all becomes ruthless hilarity -
A very sad state of affairs.

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  • Indifference
    October 5, 2008
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    :)

    Gurl I likes this.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 29, 2008

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    Sad

    Good though, it has great metaphors, flow, and I love the fact that every other line doesn't rhyme. A great write dear. ~mandie~