Clouds linger over my path
dark of rain
my mood the same
thinking of far away
Time skips with summers byes
I'm wishing another
nothing to satisfy
my lonely hunger
Dark and brooding
with frowns a moody
of sad times
and unwanted summer rhymes
Sunsets linger
on July's horizons
long into dusk
I wish night
Dark and brooding
I am
one day
I'll smile at the sun again
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I enjoyed this very much, deep emotion although dark, very captivating. A hint of light at the close. Here are some smiles for you.

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Believe it or not! Some great doors open up to bright horizons door from within that dark abyss. I know the place this speaks of all too well myself. And you've described the "undescribable vacuum" of passion's inspiration in this.


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wow...
need more?

an excellent write... such sadness from you... that leaves me speechless (so much I had to say something).
Take care my friend





