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Dark And Brooding

Clouds linger over my path
dark of rain
my mood the same
thinking of far away

Time skips with summers byes
I'm wishing another
nothing to satisfy
my lonely hunger

Dark and brooding
with frowns a moody
of sad times
and unwanted summer rhymes

Sunsets linger
on July's horizons
long into dusk
I wish night

Dark and brooding
I am
one day
I'll smile at the sun again

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  • heygoo
    August 5, 2008

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    I enjoyed this very much, deep emotion although dark, very captivating. A hint of light at the close. Here are some smiles for you.


  • suseann
    July 29, 2008

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    Believe it or not! Some great doors open up to bright horizons door from within that dark abyss. I know the place this speaks of all too well myself. And you've described the "undescribable vacuum" of passion's inspiration in this.


  • LionessK
    July 28, 2008

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    wow...

    need more?
    an excellent write... such sadness from you... that leaves me speechless (so much I had to say something).
    Take care my friend