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Haiku 152

at summer sunset
western ocean turns to gold
how rich I am now

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  • Fourthaxis
    August 17, 2008

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    I live by the sea.....beautiful..... I love walking in solitude on the beach at sunset. I'll be thinking about this tomorrow...


  • crimsondew
    August 15, 2008
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    Awww..so beautiful..congrats on the bronze!

  • mina nagi
    August 15, 2008
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    simply beautiful... well deserved bronze...

    mina


  • Age of Rain
    August 15, 2008

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    VERY well done. I would almost suggest switching the placement of 'am' and 'I' but it is great as is.

  • Ulimate
    August 5, 2008
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    I like this... well done.

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