Rock a bye baby
Close your sweet eyes
I’ll hold you and keep you
Safe in my arms
Rock a bye baby
Hush now don’t cry
Mommies alright
Close your sweet eyes
Rock a bye baby
We’ll hide here all night
I’ll hold you and keep you
From all that’s not right
Rock a bye baby
Don’t make a sound
Daddy wont hurt you
This high off the ground
Rock a bye baby
If danger gets close
We’ll rock the great tree branch
Tumbling down
Rock a bye baby
I watched you all night
Don’t cry sweet baby
I’ll hold you tight
Rock a bye baby
One more goodbye
I’ll kiss you and keep you
Safe through the night
Author notes
dancing rabbits make great stews,
This is a spin off Hush-a-bye-baby, I dont usually rhyme so most of these stanzas are not rhyming, they tell the story not all of the rhyme. anyways there you go, love it hate it I dont care.
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In time I hope you find exactly what you have alway been looking for
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True feelings
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Very well written. Although it does not rhyme completely, it does exactly what I asked.
Tge repetition and the different side of the story are great.
Well done and good luck.
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Loved it, not the abusive daddy part, but the rest.
All the best,
mj.
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wow this is stnning... very great!
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