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a style of my own

you say im goth,
im not.
i just like black.
i dress peofessinal,
so i must be a goodie.
that makes me laugh.
i look like a hick,
nope no way,
i just like my car, and time with dad.
you think im a prep,
oh god your deluosinal,
its hot out.

i have no style, not really.
i where what i want when the occation calls for.

i die my hair, what dose that make me?
really i just like to change it.
i like my hair short, am i a dyke?
really i hate that word, im bisexual.

i dont where make up, dose that make me less?
i think natural beauty is best.

i am how i am and no one will change that

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princess of love "i cant make it on my own"

princess of my love... sister or cousin, nice if you want

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  • Kal-El
    August 21, 2008
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    I like what you have here is a nice work


  • Lady Australis silver member
    August 13, 2008
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    hey sweetheart
    i think you may need to go over the spelling darling althrough i cant talk but..

    i dress perfosnal, - did you mean
    I dress professional, ?

    oh god your delosinal, did you mean
    oh god your delusional, ?

    chane - change?

    shor - short?


    occation - occasion ?

    i hope you dont mind that sweetheart
    i think its a great poem
    well done and goodluck



    • Mrs. C.
      August 14, 2008
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      thank you with you help on my spelling, i know im a tearabal speller and can use all the help i can get.


  • Elisabeth Strange
    July 29, 2008
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    great job! Best wishes in the contest!


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 28, 2008

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    Wow ahamzing from the title i knew the poem was going to be great and yeah it was. Great job. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you teh best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly :]

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