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[ half moon ]

half moon
the night shift’s
lunch break

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    August 4, 2008
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    I like this - play on the words noon and moon for lunch break.
    marlene


  • sailor ptolema
    August 3, 2008

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    I like this 'ku. Two images come to mind. One: a person who works the graveyard shift at a hospital (I don't know why that imagery comes up lol)
    and
    two:I get the image of the moon being cut in half, as if it were a sandwich lol.
    ....I think I might be hungry

    thanks for entering and g'luck.

    -sailor ptolema