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I want to be your one

Yes I want your heart, I want you by my side
I don't really want to wait, I want to hold you tight
I want to kiss your lips, to feel your skin touch mine
I want to help you fly boy, I want to be your one

but my love I know I can't rush the way you feel
If I could take the pain away don't you think I would
I've been there my self so I know how you pain feels
A heart that has been broken needs time to heal

I know she hurt you deep, the pain you locked inside
She broke your heart, she tortured your soul
she used you and threw you away.
but I want you to know my love runs very deep

I will wait till you're ready
till your strength you have found
I'll wait while you heal dear
till on solid ground you feel

How can I prove how much I love you
there are so many things that run across my mind
but I can't take the chance and rush your heart
even though all I want is to be with you

I want to be your one and only
for you have won my heart
I want to take care of you
give you the best of me

I want to hold you close
shower you with kisses
I want to fill your soul with love
till you see I am the one

take a chance and trust me
I know to trust now is hard
take the chance and I think you will find
a heart that is true in it's love for 

I would love to lift you up to shine
show the world a kind and gentle man
I would stand in the shadows
if it would prove my love to you


I want to stand by your side
to help your heart to fly
I need to feel your touch
I want to prove my love to you

if you only knew what your love means to me
you already have my heart the rest waits for you
am I the one that you have dreamed of
don't rush I'll wait until you're sure

Author notes

Prompt 3 song by Gary Allen--The One

graphic is mine--entwined hearts

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  • Florida Sunshine
    August 16, 2008

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    The poem is written with all the love and support of holding love in your hands. You make anyone want to be a part of it, I melted away. Most of all -- I did feel the 'entwining of hearts' ~ So I think you did a fantastic job with the prompt!

    Wow- What a change that makes ~ Terrific job!

    WOW - Beautiful image -- beautiful word combo--

    "I want to stand by your side
    to help your heart to fly"

    Overall, you did a terrific job ~ I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work. I don't normally give any correction, or much correct... but since the entire poem was so wonderful, and that was the only section that needed revision, I felt like you'd want to know. ~ my words were meant to help not critize your spelling.

    Thanks so much for entering the contest ~ I really do appreciate you entering.

    Best of luck to you
    Florida Sunshine


  • evilgeneral4
    August 6, 2008

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    Good Work! This poem is really beautiful and like lisa said, the point of view really gives it that something. The love put in this poem really stands out! Good Luck!


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this read from the woman to man point of veiw~
    Men can be hurt and afraid just like woman!
    To the finals you go
    Thanks for entering

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~


  • Rheea gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    I hope he knows he let a weed go and holds a sweet daisy in his hand.

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