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Langston's Smile


eyes glow summer night
golden sunset burns
too soon fall


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  • Mari Goes gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    I went to see his picture and it's like you describe here. You have showed it very nicely.


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    some smiles do fade too soon...lovely haiku-quality about this short, powerful write, PK.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Rowan gold member
    July 29, 2008
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    You nailed it.
    too soon
    yeah.


  • ennovy silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    Why? I don't know this made me think of Langston Hughs. I love had short write make your imagery come alive...novy