My eyes...
Two soulless windows to the abyss..
Hollow passageways to the dark void..
No sparkle...
No sign of feeling whatsoever..
For they are as numb as I am..
So dark..
Blacker than the night itself..
No light escapes or enters them..
Cold eyes...
Watching the world look down upon me..
And in return giving an icy, bitter glare..
Screaming...
Hoping someone will notice the pain behind them..
And answer my cry for help someday..
Hollow..
Urning for something more in life..
Begging for just one look into them from someone who cares..
Masking my pain...
So much hurt lies behind these eyes...
That no one in the world will ever be able to see..
Weeping eyes...
Crying river upon river of tears...
But their tears are wasted because no one sees them be shed..
Hopeless...
They had given up so long ago..
And there's no sign..of hope ever returning..
Dead eyes...
With no soul and nothing tying them to life..
They fade away..taking my empty dreams along with them...
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its good and sad in a way.
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you write so well .
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this hit me in the gut while reading it. one because i can feel your pain and two because i can relate to it. this is beautifully written
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Pie, please dont feel so down. You got me and megan, your a beautiful charming intelligent lass, and hope is there, you just cant see it cause its sleeping. Just believe bee just believe.
Sincerely your big brother,
deathwolf tasagka
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I loved this!
Dark and beautiful!
The best of all possible combinations.
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amazing write, it reaches out, its a beautiful piece. simply amazing, great job
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My wish for you is warm, soft eyes seeing your pain and lifting you out of that abyss. Your dreams as a young girl should be full and bigger than life. I understand this turmoil you feel but please believe, it can and will get better. Keep reaching for help, there are many caring people out there. Keep writing too, as it can be so healing for you and for others. Blessings, Patty
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