its so fun to be me.
tinny and round,
crawling on the ground.
i look left, i look right, i look all about me...
and all i see,
is green...
green from the sky to the sea.
Author notes
your so cute dani i thought id make you smile. love sissy.
not excatly a cretury but funny and cute.. hope you laugh.
A contest entry
- DO YOU HAVE IT IN YOU?? PIC INSPIRED! by Jade.Butterfly.
300 points, ended July 30, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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Nice write and very cute, but its not quite what I am looking for. Please review the instructions for the contest and reenter. Thank you. And please be sure you are a member of the group " Friends Don't Let Friends Wander Alone In The Ap" Thank you.
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Nice write!
Good rhyme and flow!
Good luck in the contest!
Regards,
DeGraw
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awww lol very cute sis... lvoed it
good luck!
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This is cute ,
cute as can be.
I like it very much you see.
Because you used the word green,
and the pic is a world full of a green scene.
Ha. Great job.
-Mandi
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