True love is something that comes and goes...
Sometimes it disappears and sometimes it grows.
True love only happens once in a lifetime...
Placing everything to the side and becoming prime.
True love is thinking where do you belong...
It also makes you feel more then just strong.
True love is like a miracle that is realized...
It's simply something that is not easily idealized...
True love is defending them from the storms and winds...
Also letting them see the magic the heart has within.
It's like giving a hug and time comes to a stop...
Just like setting them over all the rest and on top.
True love is when you see them and you get nervous...
Only giving them a true all around lovingly service.
True love is when you feel that very special sting...
Of finally realizing they are everything.
And this is why I tell you now...
I'll make you realize my heart somehow.
When you are sad I would steal a star from the sky...
Then set it within you to bring back the sparkle in your eyes.
For your true love I would cross the seven seas...
You'll see I'm strong enough for whatever you need.
For your true love I would combine the rain with the fire...
I would even give you my life only for your pleasure of desire.
For your true love I would remove everything that exists...
Only to receive from you a simple long lasting kiss.
To me true love is like writing their names everywhere...
Giving them the strength they need when life becomes unfair.
To me true love is taking the one you love very far...
Going with them to any place they wish no matter how bizarre.
True love to me means that person is your ultimate prize...
It's two words that you just can't ever surrender or let it die.
Damn it, I said true love is what everyone really wants!..
It's freaking loving everything that's right there in front.
For true love I know I would give up everything I stand for...
Fall to my knees continuing even when I can't take anymore.
This is what I think true love really is and should be.
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You'll fall on your knees? No... I don't believe.
Knights don't fall on the knees!
They just get everything without begging.
Kiding....
It's so beautiful love poem!
Hey clapping staff...!
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Um,,, Breath Taking
This Was just wonderful and i can't really think how to describe it. Again Dear Cristian you are still the most amazing writer.
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Yay!
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Is there a true definition of love? I don't know, but you've given us a good start here with this poem. Love, Lane
PS: I like your name, Cristian.
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That depends you and what you believe in sunshine. I guess you can say that a true love really depends on the one that feels it the most.
PS: You so cuters!. -
sleepy head...
did you stay up all night thinking about me?
Lane
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Aww what a beautiful write expressing what true love really is. Lovely descriptions too.
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Glad you likes!
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Great
Great Poem!!! You always write such beautiful things! I love reading your poem. Thanks a lot, I am now hooked on them. LOL. You did issue a warning on that though. Great Poem! I can't wait to read more.
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Thanks you dear friend of mine!
I love the fact that you read on! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Love you lots!
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to me, true love is basically every word you penned here, and it is true that we have only one true love in life, but other loves can make you feel nervous, but only true love will help you realize how much you would sacrifice for the one you truly love
-Meg
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So true dear... So true!
Thanks for the read!
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can true love really disappear? i believe a part may disappear only to evolve into one of greater depth... i laughed at the going with them to any place no matter how bizarre.... THAT is true... haha...
another wonderful read.
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Thank you dear beloved Nowhere!
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i like this....
makes me miss my ex tho >.< damnit,
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You'll love everything I have to offer dear..!
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I agree so too. In particular the lines of "True love is thinking where do you belong..." and this one "True love is when you see them and you get nervous...". That line just reminded me of the amazing giddiness you get and how I want that feeling again..... :-)
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And if you wait long enough... Your time will come dear Rockerstar!
Love you too!
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true love >.> I like this a lot though hun. Great job.
Love,
Sarah
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*Steals Sarah!*
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It sounds like you know a lot about this. So you've been thinking about it a lot, or you've found her.
I don't believe in "true love" exactly. I think that you can be blissfully perfect with more than one person. It's just who you pick.
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I don't know how many times I'm going to say this but...
All my poems are from my imagination/heart/mind. They are things I feel but not things that happen to me.
Now give me your nose!
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Of course you never disappoint, but this poem is probably your best
My favorite:
"When you are sad I would steal a star from the sky...
Then set it within you to bring back the sparkle in your eyes."
darn someone already said it....oh well...I love your poems. Probably because 1 they are awesome!!!! 2 because you do this (...) very often as do I and you also rhyme....great i'm rambling
Love ya and keep writing,
MR
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I guess the heart took over for this one and not my mind..!
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Tabatha
Now that you say this Andrew must be my true love cause every time I see him even after 6 yrs just a look kills me lol
I sound horrible anyways as always I loved it , You always know what to write
love tabby
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*LOL!*
Some loves kill... In a good way!
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Excellent write here
Indeed I feel if you live to all your expectations this love you shall have forever and a day for its the only way to truly love someone I would say .Bravo
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Glad you see it on my point of view.
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Ah, I like it.
I can agree so much with it.
True love is something everyone wants and most find, eventually in life. I hope I do
It's amazing how heartfelt your writes are.
You did a great job with it and I think that it flows so nicely.
I love this "When you are sad I would steal a star from the sky...
Then set it within you to bring back the sparkle in your eyes."
~~ gorgeous.
Kudos, my friend
Sincerely,
sarah ~
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Ah, life is good when you have a true love by your side..!
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