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Miniature Golf

Hot air balloons soar above my head
flowers in shades of red
beautiful princess on the green
Many objects unseen
a fun game to play
Grab your club
putt away

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photo prompt: 30 words
http://i37.tinypic.com/auxlaf.jpg

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  • retribusive
    August 4, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry! Interesting take on the picture, I like it!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 29, 2008

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    a unique write (this isn't something usually alot of people write about) and nice imagery.

    this was good


  • Ally
    July 29, 2008

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    This is great, especially as you only had a 30 word max. You've used the picture well- i would have never thought of miniature golf- a creative take!!
    the last line "putt away" made me smile. i dont know why- its somewhat humorous.
    Good luck with the contest!! XXX