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Lord, Bring Me Peace

Lord, bring me peace,
That I may give peace to those who have none.
Show me love,
That I should love like none the Earth has ever seen.

Lord, teach me wisdom,
That I can fairly mediate the quarrels around me.
Give me patience,
That I shall not be rash.

Lord, show me light,
That I may share that light with those in darkness.
Tell me words,
That will wake the sleeping hearts of humankind.

Lord, I pray that I may follow You
The best I can, without harming Your children.
Lord, keep me safe as I go through life,
And give me the strength to keep believing.

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 31, 2008
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    This hit me in the gut, especially the final stanza.

    Beautifully stated.


  • ourgirlFriday
    August 7, 2008
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    Lovely!

    Yes, it flows well. A very lovely prayer and write to share with us. Thank you!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 30, 2008

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    a wonderful prayer, keep it flow it forming my friend, may the Lord be with you in life as well as your pen.