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Goodness








God's kind grace
encapsulates true love
from every imaginable atrocity.














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Prompt:
[Lyrics Line Prompt]

For a shield from the storm-
from Christina Aguilera: I Turn to You

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Goodness
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: encapsulates true love-
    and reference to how God through kind grace - encapsulates For some reason I'm shown flaws within Humanity but He still understands mistakes one makes and helps those individuals who accepts His guidance- especially during unimaginable and imaginable atrocities- I'm being told- He extends empowerment whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~