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The Winning Play

It was Saturday morning

At a little past nine,

The game was moving quickly,

And I was standing near the white line.

 

When the game became tied,

We were filled with fear.

When the coach called us over,

We all came near.

 

The coach cheered us up

And made us all feel fine.

Then the whistle blew

Because it was time.

 

Someone tried to score

But our goalie blocked the ball,

We stood in amazement

That was really a close call.

 

When all of the sudden

The ball came my way,

I kicked it and scored

The winning play!

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    ALL RIGHT!!! You scored the winning play!
    CONGRATULATIONS!! Great poem; thanks for entering.
    Good luck.
    Brian


  • Melodies
    September 24, 2008

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    Glad to meet you and enjoy playing poetry with you, fine young poet person! I love sports poetry and fun and games of all sorts.


  • Foodahalic
    August 15, 2008
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    Very good poem,great rhyming skillz.


  • longlife
    August 8, 2008

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    WOW this is aMAZIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice Shiny trophy!
    -longlife


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 4, 2008
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    Congratulations on the well-deserved award!!
    Well Done!

  • PianoMan
    August 1, 2008

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    Cool poem! Congratulations on scoring the winning goal!

    When all of a sudden
    The ball came my way,
    I kicked it and scored
    The winning play!!!!!!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 30, 2008
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    very cool. sounds like a fun time.


  • Slick99
    July 28, 2008

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    very very double supercalifragilisticexpialidocious awesome! thanks for entering!!!!!! -slick99

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