Intoxicating gaze
created upon clouds
oceanic image
in sweetness,
passion
Author notes
prompt: speak to me 10 words
picture A
artist: Jim Warren
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VII - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words
ceanic image...
and I kept getting picture of fruit hanging from a tree- looks like a peach but hearing reference to passion fruit- seeing fingers twist and pick- whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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just wonderful 10 words...filled with the fragrance of love...all the best
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