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Colours of the Wind

Cradled by the gentle puffs of scented lace
gracefully dancing past the sun with fragrant steps
refreshing honeysuckle daubs the peaceful air
painting colours in my mind making all thoughts crystal
clear

As the wind caress the waves that coil and kiss the sand  
whistling past the vines that stretch for freedom
twisting ropes of grass with Sighs of pitchless laughter
not knowing how to unslip the love knots, we have tied

Weaving reds into the sky with streaks of golden blaze
trailing clouds across the Fire with tranquil display
leaving blurred birthmarks upon the waiting eyes that follow
as the wind sets the heaven's path with racing speed

 

The rise and fall of the ridge way hues

as a night shade curtains open stars to the horizon

leaving pitch black words unspoken between us

as the sun and wind travel to greet the bottom of the world

 

 

Author notes

16 lines(not incuding the spaces)
full of imagery (hopefully)
used spellcheck
an no profanity of any kind suitale for everyone

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  • BellaD
    July 30, 2008
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    This piece is so visually rich! Lovely imagery. Thanks so much for your entry.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    well even if you think its hard to write, you wrote it wonderfully
    i really adorded reading it, had so many images and lovely ideas
    good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    sorry i peeked..and i wanted to warn you....it says free verse, i dont know if you are going to change it or not....but yeah *hides*
    either way i like the describtions so far so keep it up and ill come back when you are done


    • SeaWithYourHeart
      July 28, 2008
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      thanks for th heas up onthe hmei didt realise i was doing it l till you said hehe its a bad habit

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