I.
You know how my eyes darken
when I'm deep in thought?
How it's like my body shuts down
as it begs to understand
what's going on with everything we're feeling
[what are you feeling baby?]
my thoughts have been with you
these past few days[i think we're closing in
on a week or two now]
It's like something is pulling me towards you
some silent connection
that maybe we're not meant to understand.
II.
But my[heart.soul.mind]are giving in
Falling ever so slowly
and I'm wondering if you'll be there to catch me.
[This is silly;I can't be falling]
I'm even removing my thoughts from you
in some desperate attempt to soften the drop
in hopes that I can slow myself down.
But it's the way you smile
and hold my hand in the car.
The way you kiss me slowly[igniting that spark]
and pull me close because you want me there
You feel so right for me.
III.
My thoughts are just of you these days
[like I've said a thousand times before]
and I'm not sure if I'm the only one.
You tell me everyday how you think of me
[I think I scare you somehow too]
I think maybe you're just as afraid of falling as I am.
So much intensity; so much spark
coursing though our bodies
You're too perfect for me
[You've convinced me I'm perfect for you]
Don'tWishMeAway--x
Author notes
Same old feeling...falling.
but its getting greater.
we spent the entire day together yesterday just relaxing and being together.
he makes me so happy.
when he kisses me...theres a spark.
secret #71: I'm praying so hard that you'll be the one that saves me
WishMeAway--x
A contest entry
- - Dear Diary: Unique Challenge! - by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 11, 2008, 110 entries
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Comments
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ahh how beautiful it is to feel that falling and to just not want to stop it, because he is just so stunning! I relate kind of, though I try to not fall in love as I'm afraid to be hurt. As I usually am.
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he is so stunning.
im so afraid of falling in love with him.
but i think i already did.
ive been hurt, but you know when you're able to trust...and i learned to trust him. he told me he doesnt even want to think of hurting me because he doesnt ever want too.
=]
♥
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'Falling ever so slowly
and I'm wondering if you'll be there to catch me.
[This is silly;I can't be falling]'
I know exactly how this feels sweetie.
I loved that I fell though, because I finally fell for the right person, somebody that wanted to catch me.
I think I found my forever&&ever baby.
Iloveyou.
[♥...Forever]
like glitter&&glue
♥
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i think i might've found my forever&&ever too.
he's so perfect baby.
im happy aaron is your perfect one too.
we're both finally happy...and i love it
iloveyou
[♥...Forever]
likeglitter&&glue
♥
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