stars sing melodies,
radiance glows
love's perpetuity
quenching
kissed seductions
Author notes
PROMPT:
picture D found on photobucket.com
10 words
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VII - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLDS THREE by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 5, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent short poem left me begging for more
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A well pened ten words of brilliance here Very well done a fine smaple of talent
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Holy Moly! This is amazing! what a great job you did on this one! I love it!! I have a hard time with the 10 word ones
But you seem to have it down perfectly!
Congrats on the Gold!
and love
Nyetta
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A lovely piece in so few words... very well done! The depth and beauty is exquisite indeed. Nicely done, and well deserved gold my dear!
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this a nice write, congrats on the gold, it totally deserved it *hugs*
keep writting and winning those golds
Stephanie ♥
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Love Beneath the Stars
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: love's perpetuity
and reference to kissed seductions...for I was getting images for some reason of comic books but a series- Reference to exclusive-limited edition Also being shown a sponge squeezed full of water- - whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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fulfillments achieved....and arise the river of fervor leaving me contented...
good luck in the contest
mal
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Very nice feel and imagery. Music of the spheres harmonizing in the moment of connection. Well done dear sis, best to you in the contest.
Mouser
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