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Mirror of Life

With honey's mysteries
her breath revive
naked sunshine of desert

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  • Desire gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Thank You!!


    Thank You for Your entry: Mirror of Life
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: honey's mysteries
    and reference to naked sunshine- for some reason when I kept reading...her breath revive- I keep hearing revives- her breath revives-
    also after reading I kept seeing a sun dial - pointing East- and the sun appeared as replica of the mystical sun image- - whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Malabu
    July 30, 2008

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    With honey's mysteries
    her breath revives
    naked sunshine of desert
    love the thoughts here tatts
    Mally